Critique an Article I wrote?

[kansasbuckeye]

Hey everyone, I have been venturing into writing articles for a few sites and was wondering what you think of FISHING IN KANSAS . I would appreciate any and all input that I can get on it.

[SeaRay]

Well written and informative. Only suggestion I would have is when you mention that the Walleye is called a pickerel in Canada. I would stongly emphasize that the Walleye is not a the Pike and it is a mistake to associate the 2 fish. I have heard them called Walleye Pike and I wonder how many people turn their nose up thinking it is a bony fish and not worth fooling with. Course that leaves more for us that know the difference.
Enjoyed reading the article.

[kansasbuckeye]

Actually pike is a very good eating fish and easy to fillet if you do it right. I will definitely keep that in mind though, thank you for the input!

[crappiedoc]

I had read that before through some links, I liked it

[kansasbuckeye]

Thanks for the feedback, I'm just starting to cut my teeth on writing so I appreciate the advice and feedback from you guys.