Love the tie, looks like a good damsel fly for sure and a descent dragon fly too. Better than anything I have ever tied as far as either bug for sure. One thing you might want to try is to get the head and main body to stay on top with the tail slightly under water like it is laying eggs or something.
Tying the wings on top might help too.
Once you get some movement on the water that should get a lot of takes and hook some nice fish. Maybe fish it really slow with a long rest and then a hard flutter struggle type action. Might trigger a fish to take it when it stops.
I love taking my kids fishing, now if I could just manage to fish at the same time.