We are making some real progress now. No big deal, but here are two suggestions for a rewording in Rule 4:

Consider changing from: Keep your language on the water (and everywhere for that matter) appropriate for children!

To: Keep your language appropriate for children.

Also,

Consider chinging from: “Do not keep young children out too long to where they are getting antsy and restless.”

To: When fishing with young children be prepared to come off the water when they begin to show signs of boredom and restlessness.


As I said, nothing big, just very minor tweeks for consideration.