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Fantastic story.....very good read, Thanks Chris # 3
Great story, need more soon!:fish
Nicely done looking forward to the rest of it
Great read. I can hardly wait for more. BTW, I would have been the mop headed kid in this scenario.
Nice read. Is there something missing from chapter 1? The story went from William Baker ordering his boat. Straight to Little Billy watching the new neigbours moving in.
Awesome!!!!!!!
It's definitely a good read.
Wannabe a what. Your already a writer, so what else could you wannabe? Enjoyable read.
:HandsClapping
makings of a hallmark movie!
It's like a fishermans soap opera, it leaves you wondering what going to happen next. A really great read so far.
dont leave me hangin
It's a great story, kind of a parallel to one I might pass on one day. Very well done.
great
Great story
Good story
We need chapter 5
i am ready for more story---------cant wait
Hurry up with the rest!!! LOL
cant wait to retire and take some kids fishing
Man, that ain't no quick read!
I'm looking forward to the next installments. Thanks for picking this for us to read.
Great story