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Fantastic story.....very good read, Thanks Chris # 3
Great story, need more soon!:fish
Nicely done looking forward to the rest of it
Great read. I can hardly wait for more. BTW, I would have been the mop headed kid in this scenario.
Nice read. Is there something missing from chapter 1? The story went from William Baker ordering his boat. Straight to Little Billy watching the new neigbours moving in.
Awesome!!!!!!!
It's definitely a good read.
Wannabe a what. Your already a writer, so what else could you wannabe? Enjoyable read.
:HandsClapping
makings of a hallmark movie!