I see you have Spider wire line in the diagram.
The other day out on the water, 1 out of the 3 of us was using fireline and wasn't hooking up. 2 out of 3 were using just mono and hooking up left and right. It wasn't till after my buddy with the fireline put a tiny swivel on and a mono leader did he start catch'n the crappies and gills.
So my point is:
Try a swivel instead of the bobber stop and use a mono leader so the fish catch see the line.
Just a thought.
Great tip otherwise.
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