I don't know diddly about galvanized tanks but here are a couple ideas I thought of when I read your post.
How long did you wait between the time you filled up the tank to the time you added the minnows? From my history with aquariums I can tell you for sure that you need to let the water sit for a few hours minimum, just to let it "air out". Straight out of the tap, water has little microscopic bubbles of air trapped in it and you need to give the water time to let that escape. Otherwise, as the fish breathe, those little bubbles attach to their gills and will kill them. It's a lot worse during the winter, sometimes the water will even look cloudy but it's just tiny bubbles.
Also, a dramatic temp change will shock them all and probably kill some, like if your cooler was at room temp, but your new tank was still cool.
Then, you also will want to try to acclimate them to the new water as much as you can before you dump them in. If there is a dramatic change in PH levels, ammonia, or some other chemical, you can lose some fish from that too. To minimize that, you could dump 1/3 of the cooler water into the new tank and then fill the cooler back up with tank water (with the fish still in the cooler). Wait an hour and then do it again. Then move the fish AND all the water from their cooler over to the new tank. By that point you have mixed up the water enough that there shouldn't be a huge shock to their systems when they get moved to the new tank.
Anyway, that's three lessons I learned the hard way over the years. Maybe you already knew all that stuff, but hopefully something in there was helpful to somebody.
Back when I was a college student I had a 50 gallon tank with some really big fish that got successfully moved between Topeka and Manhattan four times a year, and I had no troubles whatsoever once I followed those tips religiously.
Good luck with your minnow tank.
I am just pullin' your leg.:D